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本帖最后由 妮妮 于 2018-1-10 10:41 编辑

(一): My  Classroom

My  classroom  is  nice  and  big . There  are  forty  desks  and  chairs  in  the  classroom. There  are  two  black  boards  on  the  walls.  And  there  are  two  pictures,  too. My  classroom  has  eleven  lights  and  twelve  fans.  What colour  are  the  fans ? They  are  blue.  At  the  coner,  there  is  a shelf , many  books  are  in  the  shelf.  I  like  the  books  very  much.
  This  is  my  classroom , it  is  very nice. I  like  my  classroom  very  much .  Do  you  have  a  nice  classroom, too ?

二): Last Weekend

  I had a happy weekend last week.
  On Saturday morning, I watched TV and helped my mother wash clothes. In the afternoon, I cleaned three bedrooms in my house-- mine, my parents' and my brother's.
  On Sunday, I played football in the park. Then I went to my grandparents' house. Grandpa played the piano! The whole family was so happy. Later, we wanted to swim. But it was too cold.
  This was last weekend.

(三): My Teacher's House

  My English teacher has a big house.
  It has a living room, a big dining room, two bedrooms, a study, two bathrooms and a big kitchen.
  In the living room, there is a big picture, four brown sofas, white fans and blue walls. The TV set is big. There is a big Chinese knot on the wall. There are lanterns below the lights. I like them.
  This is my English teacher's house.

(四):Asking The Way

  Mark: Excuse me, sir. I'm new here. where is the cinema?
  policeman: Oh, It's to the east of the bookstore.
  Mark: How can I  get there?
  policeman: You can go by bus.
  Mark: Which bus can I take?
  policeman: You can take the NO.302 bus.
  Mark: Can I go by bike?
  policeman: Sure. If you like. It' not far.
  Mark: Thank you very mush.
  policeman: You're welcome.
  Mark: Good-bye.
  policeman: Bye.

(五):What is family ?

  Everybody has his own family. What is family?  I don't think everyone really knows. There are six letters in the word “ FAMILY ”。 I think   “ F ” means “father”, “A” means “and”, “ M ” means “mother” , “ I ” means“ I”, “ L” means “ love” and “ Y ” means “you”。 So “ FAMILY ” is the short form of “ Father and mother , I love you.”  Don't you think so ? Father and mother love us , and we love father and mother . That's a happy family.

(六):My Favourite Teacher

  Hello,my name is Steven. I have many good teachers, but my favourite teacher is Miss Li. SWhe is a very good teacher.
  She is very young, but her English is very good. She teaches us  English every day. Her class has so much  fun.She sings songs with us, plays games with us. We are so happy . And we learn English  well. Our English are very very good.So I like her very much.
  She likes reading books  and playing sports. After class, Miss Li  often plays  sports with us. We are very happy. We all  love her very much.
  This is my favourite teacher.She is a good teacher .I like my English teacher very much. What about you?Do you have a good teacher, too?

(七):The Colour of Autumn

  Autumn comes , it gets cooler and cooler. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. You would say autumn is blue and white.
  Look ! Birds are flying from the north to the south. The leaves are yellow. Some are hanging on the trees, some are on the ground ,some are dancing in the wind. Someone would say autumn is yellow.
  There are so many fruits in autumn in Xinxing . Pears ,peaches. Mangos, oranges and so on. They're fresh and healthy.
  Oh! I see. Autumn is a harvest season. Autumn is colourful. What a beautiful season !

(八):Spring Rain

  Spring comes.lt'sgetting warmer and warmer.Everything is dry, trees, fields and even the air. Just then, it rains. lt's as soft as silk. lt washes the dirty of the earth and waters the plants and the fields. lt also waters people's hears. Farmers stand in the spring rain and smile.
  Spring rain is as dear as oil They seem to see the harvest time inautumn. Spring rain brings water to the air. It also brings hope to people.

(九):Happy Family

  Everyone has a family. I have a family, too. I name it “Happy family”, because everyone in my family is happy.
  Come and meet my family, please! My mother is kind. I love her, and she loves me, too. My mother is pretty. She likes beautiful clothes. I call her“Dressy Mum”。 My father is a boss. He is tall and thin. He has a small head. I give him a nickname“Small Head Father”。 I am fat and lovely. I have a big head. I give myself a nickname“Big Head Girl”。 I study hard. I am a good student.
  We are happy every day!

十):Shopping in Xia Jiu Road

  Saturday,March 4th                                     Sunny
  “What a beautiful day! The sky is blue and the clouds are white.” Said my mother. “Yes. Let's go to Xia Jiu Road.” Said my father. I was really happy and I jumped very high.
  Xia Jiu Road is more famous than the other shopping centers, because everyone says “Xia Jiu Road is the shopping world.” I saw a clothes shop over there, and I said to my parents, “Mum, Dad, let's go in!” Mum and Dad looked me and said, “You are really a child.” I was really perky(神气的) and said “OK. Let's just go in !” I bought a lot of beautiful clothes. My parents were unhappy. I pat on their shoulders and said, “Don't be angry, because everyone says 'Fine clothes make the man‘, isn't it?” My parents said together, “No, it isn't. But we all love you. ” We laughed together and my parents were happy again.
  Today I was very happy, because I bought a lot of clothes and had a good time. I don't think “You can't eat the cake and have it”is right.

(十一):The fun picture

    Let me say something about the picture.
  There are two tall trees in it. Under the tree there is a long chair. And there is an old man reading about swimming. Near the old man, there is a boy painting. I think he loves painting very much. Next to the painting boy, there are two boys playing football. They are happy. But the football is in the river. Near the river, there are three children fishing. They go fishing about twice a week and they always go to the People's Park. They like fishing. In the river, there is clear water and some fish swimming in it. The sky is clear, the sun is shining brightly,  the weather is warm There are two birds flying in the sky, they are happy. Wow, that is a fun picture!
  Dear friends, can you draw the picture?

(十二):Visiting the Museum

  It was fine for traveling last Sunday . I showed Ann round the museum . she was surprised to see many old things , and she was interested in the King's hat . She wanted to buy one. I told her it wasn 't real . Ann kept asking me some other thinges.
  When she saw a thing with three legs and a strange top , she stopped to point at in and asked me , “ What is that ? ” “ It is a cup . ” I told her .

(十三):My Room

  I have my own room. It is big and nice. There is a bed, a desk and a shelf. The doll is on the bad. The lamp is on the desk. The books are on the shelf. The trash bin is behind the door. The clothes are in the closet. There is a air-conditioner over the closet. Look! There are many pictures on the wall. I love my room very much.

(十四):Four Seasons

  There are four seasons in a year. They are spring、summer、fall and winter.
  I like spring. It is warm. It often rains. I can plant trees and flowers in spring. The spring is green.
  Summer is very hot. I can swim in the river.
  Fall is a good season. It is nice. I can fly kites in fall. I can eat many apples too.
  Winter is cold. I wish I can play snow and make a snowman in Beijing someday. Because it does not snow in Xinxing.
  I love all the seasons, because they are nice.

(十五):A letter to my mother

  Dec. 7th
  Dear mother,
  I have been good at school. I often think of you when I go to bed because we always go for a walk before go to bed at home. So I miss you everyday. Do you miss me? Why don't you call me? I've got a lot of things to tell you. One of the things is about foreign teacher's daughter. Her name's Skyler. She lives in Canada. She comes to our class to learn Chinese and English with me in my class. This afternoon, when it was art and craft class, our class were cleaning the gymnasium. And she did it with us too. So I usually talk to her when she doesn't know what to do? But when the class is over, I always haven't got enough time to talk to her. And I usually can't find her. So we don't have time to introduce to each other. But it is the first time that I have a foreign student. So I'm very happy! Mum, you often tell me, “If you are happy, I'll be happy, too.” So you have to be happy, because I'm happy! I like you when you are happy!
  In the end I wish you everything is just fine!

(十六):My Pen Pal

  Since last summer, I have written to my pen pal, Seda, who lives in Turkey. I became acquainted with her when I went to England for a study tour. We stayed with the same family, and she was my roommate and classmate as well. Sometimes we went to the movies together after dinner. Seda is very easy to get along with. I will always remember the two weeks I spent with her. We didn't forget each other and kept writing to each other after we returned home. Although I haven't seen her again since I left England, I still know how she is through letters, cards and photographs. Seda tells me her secrets and also shares her happiness and sadness with me . Both of us hope that we will meet each other somewhere one day. Maybe I'll go to Turkey to visit her, or she'll come to Taiwan to visit me.

(十七):The bird and cat

  Once upon a time. There was a house. Beside the house there was a bird cage. One day a cat went to eat the bird, So the cat jumped and hit the bird cage. The bird cage fell down to the ground knocking the bird cage's door open. The bird then flew away. So the cat started to chase the bird and the dog chased the cat. However the bird flew on top of the tree. So the cat started to climb the tree and the dog barked at the cat. Before the cat could reach the bird, the bird flew away. this caused the cat to fall out of the tree. The dog then ran away, The bird quickly flew back into his cage and the man from the house carried him safely home.

(十八):Birthday

  My birthday is on Sunday. My parents are going to have a birthday party at home. I invite my friends to come to the party.
  At the party. They give me many small presents. Such as cards, picture books, pens.
  They sing Happy Birthday to me. My mother makes a big cake for me. I cut the cake into small pieces and give them out. we sing and dance.
  We have a good time at the party.

(十九):Save Earth

  This is the earth. The green part is land. The blue part is sea. The white part is clouds. Our earth is very beautiful and interesting. There are rivers, streams, seas and lakes. There are hills and mountains. There are woods, jungles and forests. There are many countries and cities. There are many people live in them. Do you think the earth is very wonderful?
  Many years ago, the earth is very clean. But nowadays there is much pollution on the earth. There is air pollution, land pollution and water pollution。People are cutting down the forests.
  Many wild animals, birds and insects lose their homes. People are killing animals for their food and their skins. It's very cruel. People are polluting the land, the water and the air. People must stop doing this. We must save the earth.

(二十):A library

  A library used to be only a building with a lot of books and a very quiet place to me. I had never wanted to enter a traditional library because it was a boring place for a child. Since I became a senior high school student, I have more homework that requires me to find the latest information on a topic or some good ideas. So I got into the habit of going to the library, and I can't tell you how wonderful it is! There are so many interesting books I've never read, including novels and books about science and computers. Most important of all, there are even a lot of famous classic films, which are very popular. Now I also have something else to do when I'm in a library: studying. Studying together with a lot of people is a good experience. Now I'm never bored when I'm in a library. Do you want to see how much fun it is? Come with me to a library today!

(二十一):Cartoons

  There are many television programs in Taiwan today, from TV aeries, quiz shows, soap operas, movies to cartoons. Of all the programs, I like to watch cartoons the best, like Cartoon network, Disney and many others. I like to watch cartoons because they are funny and very interesting, especially when I am sad, tired or bored. I also like cartoon characters. They are so cute and vivid. We must use our imagination when we watch cartoons. Because they are often exaggerated, so you need to have a sense of humor.

(二十二):Sportsmanship

 Every sportsman should have sportsmanship. When defeated, he should greet his opponent and congratulate him. If he can't, on one will care to be his opponent because he lacks basic decorum and the spirit of a good sportsman. A true sportsman has a generous heart, admits to his loss and does not act with vexation. Learning to have sportsmanship is very important. It doesn't always matter whether one wins or not. What's even more important than results is what you have learned from each competition.

(二十三):我与自然

  Living in the concrete jungle, we have to admit that our busy. extravagant lives are corroding our souls little by little. Only by being close to nature can we recover our vitality and go back our true selves. Breathing in fresh air, smelling the fragrance of flowers and listening to the sounds of birds and streams, we can release our tensions and listening to the sounds of birds and streams, we can our tensions and cleanse our minds of the tiresome things around us. Form the journey of water, we can understand the circle of life. Also, we can learn to be kind people from the peace of mountains. We can learn a lot as we enjoy the cozy atmosphere of nature. We may consider nature as a great book, and noting in the can delight us as much as it!

(二十四):shall we go out to play football?

  Afrer a whole day's hard studing, I fell very tierd and want to go out to play football for fan. But my teachers always say that it takes too much time and can make us away from studing.So they usually don't let us play football.
  While teachers reject it, we still want to have a play. I think the playing after school can be a redressal and make our bodies healthier. At the same time, temperate exercise won't tamper with our studies.
    According to that, I think playing football after school have more advantages than disadvantages.

(二十五)我的愿望

  I have no other wish except to be an English teacher.This is the only dream I have because I think being an English teacher is very cool.I can speak to foreign people smoothly and read English books and caricature easily.I can see English movies and some albums without titles.
  There is another reason why I want to be an English teacher.My first English teacher was Mr.Gao in my primary school.I never went to an English class before in primary school so I was not as good as my classmates.But he always encourage me and helps me a lot.He always smiled at me and said,“Don't worry.I believe you can be better.”So every time when I am too lazy to study English I remember what he said to me and keep on studying.
  Now I am the English teacher's aide in my class.I love English and I love to teach my classmates,too.I always encourage my classmates and say,“Don't worry.I believe you can be better.”just like Mr.Gao always said to me.I think with this perfect model I will be an English teacher in the future. Wish me luck!

(二十六) 最快乐的时光

  I remember last summer vacation I went to a beach to spend my holiday.It is a beach in the north TaiWan I stay there for a week with my family in a high class hotel near the beach.It happened that my father's friend was the manager of a hotel so we could have better rooms.Everything seen as expensive and big in the hotel room.The bathtub was big and could massage.The bed was big and comfortable.The window was big and I can see the beautiful beach through the glass.
  I remember one day I went to the beach with some other kids in the hotel.We brought a lot of stuff such as:a beach ball,water guns,some snacks and drinks.We had a lot of fun on the beach.We played beach vollyball and some games.At about six o'clock,we sat on the beach,watching the sun set and chatting about nothing.The sun set was the most beautiful one I've ever seen.At that time,I really wanted the time to stopped for ever.
  On the day we will leaving we took a lot of picturs in the hotel and outside the hotel,too.I also exchange my MSN count with some friends there and we're still good friends now.When I got in the car I went to goodbye to my friends then I looked at the beach.The trees near by the beach were bolw by the wind and looked like they were waving goodbye to me.What a wonderful ending for my vacation!I think this is the happiest moment in my life.

(二十七) Protect environment

  The earth scale change of climate has brought a new kind of natural disaster and the developed and complicated city system is holding a latent risk of expanding the damage artificially. Also people has been spoiling the health since the immense quantity of chemicals have been produced and already used in pursuit of convenience and various toxic substances have been produced unintentionally and accumulated in environment. Therefore, We need some countermeasures from the viewpoint to prevent the city environment form disaster and to manage environmental risks. So we will develop and improve a new risk management system and a disaster prevention system to preserve and create the city environment where people feel easy and sound in their life.
  “The Games of the 29th Olympiad in 2008 are awarded to the city of Beijing.”
  The International Olympic Committee selected the Chinese capital as the 2008 host in Friday's vote during Juan Antonio Samaranch's last IOC session as president.The attraction of staging the Games in a country which has the world's largest population, as well as huge economic potential, won the IOC's heart.
  Beijing defeated four other bidding cities, including Toronto and Paris, to secure the country's first-ever Olympics. Osaka was the first city to go out, and it only took one more round for Beijing to win the Olympic race.

(二十八) Help mum do the housework

  One day, I said to my mum: “Mum, let me wash the dishes.” “Really? I'm so happy to hear that.” Mum said.
  After dinner, my first job was to get the dirty dishes to the kitchen. Then I began to wash them. I turned on the tap and water covered all the dishes in the sink. Then I added some detergent to the water. Maybe I put too much, so it was full of bubbles in the sink. It was just like a bubble bath for dishes and bowls. I caught a bowl to wash. It was slippery. “Pang!” The bowl slipped from my fingers. It dropped into the sink and broke another bowl and a dish. It was terrible! There was only one dish left.
  In the end, my mother cleared the pieces and helped me clean the dishes. I think I'll do a better job next time.

(二十九)A letter to my parents

  Dear dad and mum,
  I have been very happy in the school. Sometimes, at night I cry in the bed because I miss you very much. You always say “Learn well and I will be happy.” So I work hard in the school every day. After class I play with my classmates. We skip rope, play cards and ball and so on. I spend a lot of time doing my homework. After lunch we have to do Kumon. When I finish, I play Pingpong with my friends. Then I spend some time reading my English notes. At six o'clock I have my evening class. Then I have my evening snack at twenty past seven. After that, I have some free time. At eight o'clock, I go to bed. This is a day in the school. Mum, you always tell me “Happiness is very important in our life.” So I want to be happy every day. If you are not happy, call me please.

  Yours,
  Laura

(三十) 跟好朋友吵架

  I had a big argument with my good friend yesterday because of the baseball teams.During the break time,we argument about which team is the best in the league big.I thought it is yangqi and he thought it is redsocks.After the argument,he went of to say goodbye to me and close the door loudly.I was so angry with him.
  Then he still didn't talk to me during the next break time.He didn't even look at me.I started to feel sad because he is my best friend.When it was time to go home I asked him if he wanted to go with me as usual.He looked at me with a strange look and still turned away.But this time,he did say goodbye to me quietly.
  In the end,while I was watching TV the phone ring.It was him and he said he was sorry about what he did,he felt childish.I said never mind we are still good friends.Now I feel much better I hope we won't argument any more.

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如果当时 发表于 2018-1-10 11:18:52 | 显示全部楼层
收藏起来给孩子好好学习学习,谢谢小编的分享
陈年豆蔻 发表于 2018-1-19 17:46:10 | 显示全部楼层
我们家孩子的英语作文语序都是乱的,赶紧收藏学习学习

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希望对孩子有帮助哦  详情 回复 发表于 2018-1-19 17:49
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我们家孩子的英语作文语序都是乱的,赶紧收藏学习学习

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